I like the new site and appreciate that a lot of effort will have gone into creating it. However, I am really unhappy about the line: "You tweak the code to fit your exact needs".
The previous draft published on the forum read:
A simple way to build fast, secure and professional Web applications.
Design and create the database;
Auto-generate the corresponding PHP code using Yii;
Tune up the generated code to fit for the actual requirements.
Even this, with the use of ‘tune up’, I thought a bit misleading, but changing it to ‘tweak’, well the politest thing I can say is that its disingenuous. The word tweak means - To adjust slightly; to fine-tune. Building sites with Yii is a lot more than this. What’s more, nearly every serious visitor to the site will know this, so these words will simple undermine their confidence in what else is said.
[list=1][]You create the database;[]Yii generates the base PHP code;[*]You customize the code to fit your exact needs.[/list]
I would suggest to remove "you", something like:[list=1][]Create the database - or - Design and create the database[]Generate the base PHP using Yii code generator[*]Customise the code to fit your exact needs[/list]